I can tell. I'm just used to my aforementioned format, that's how I've used it for so long, and with the Army if you say otherwise, they'll just correct you. So a.m and p.m with hundred hours is not a thing here. Us Americans are apparently special with our measurements. 😁
I played this game last night i didn't read any dialogue i just skiped all the dialogue becuase i haven't a lot of time but the game impress me a lot. keep going kile this guys good job !
I have to say, as many others, this VN (visual novel) has a great potential. Sadly there are so many errors that even for one like me, whose native language is not english, they're really distracting... I see now... because it was translated from russian into english, that's why.
Also, the expressions of the characters or the scenes often won't match the story.
These are some thaughts for now. I don't know if the game itself isn't finished at all (like others here in this genre) or if you are just going to add more. Since I am not even half way through, I guess, I haven't experienced much but I know that there's one story line missing. Okay so it seems I played through.
Take your time. People mostly prefere quality over quantity.
To be honest I think it went too fast when John told the “main character“ to put his head on his lap but it's no big deal after all.
You now may think I only have bad words for your work but it's really not like that. I only discovered VNs recently but I have played through a couple by now. Most of them are very well made and much longer so I am propably more critical than I should be. I know it takes time to write and do all the work which comes with a VN.
(To name a few VN: Tennis Ace, WSSAP - Wolfstar Sins and Paradise, Uncommon Breed, Human Cargo (not the best artwork but pretty great story and romance), Guardians of ParVa'La (very unfinished but super story so far (and sex, if that's important to you)). These onse are insane. There are more but I haven't managed to play them, yet. (For example Morenatsu, Echo, After Class, Adastra...)
Anyways good luck with bringing out future updates and keep it up!
Cheers from Germany
( By the way the story so far made me really excited for what is coming up next. I have some ideas about what might happen, though... ;)
So this is a pretty good update. As promised, the buttons and titles have been translated. There are no complaints about the buttons, but the names do not look very good. (This is just my whining, do not worry). In addition to small grammatical mistakes (I believe in you, Hroft32), I noticed one serious.
If you decide to talk about the corpses and the next choice you answer the letter, the main character will want to talk again about the corpses and show us an empty map.
I have to say the game surprised me. The history and the environment are well implemented. The character graphics are very changeable when Jean suddenly loses the weapon or the helmet. Here and there are a few typos, but the game has very good points in terms of structure and characters. I hope Jean gets a little more attention I already like him. I am excited which way it will continue.
1. Refectory and my Office are swapped on the card at the computer.
2. If you do not give the necklace to Nikolai, there will be an error screen and if you press Ignore the scene is already over =
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code: File "game/Map6.rpy", line 142, in script Exception: Sayer 'Ni' is not defined.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback: File "game/Map6.rpy", line 142, in script File "C:\Users\ERDAL\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 593, in execute who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast) File "C:\Users\ERDAL\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 509, in eval_who raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who.encode("utf-8")) Exception: Sayer 'Ni' is not defined.
i'm loving this game so far, i hope that for next update may include sex scenes and if there was a sidestory or something to have with john that'd be nice, he is so cute!
also i realized that in some parts the music sounds really bad and lazy (no offense) so you could improve that like the gym music or battle music.
i like a lot the direction the game is going and i'd say that it really got a lot of potential, please keep adding more stuff to it, i love it!
Ok, downloaded the new version and tried to boot up a save before speaking with the prisoner a second time and got this for my trouble after I did two rollbacks and the game auto closed.
-Edit-
After going back two saves to the mess hall it went as normal, damn weird though. Good thing I'm one of those save often kinda people.
Will leave the trace log up regardless.
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code: File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 256, in script python: File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 260, in <module> renpy.call_in_new_context("_main_menu") KeyError: u'_main_menu_screen'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback: File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 295, in bootstrap renpy.main.main() File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\main.py", line 487, in main run(restart) File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\main.py", line 147, in run renpy.execution.run_context(True) File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 761, in run_context context.run() File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 256, in script python: File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 814, in execute renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store) File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1719, in py_exec_bytecode exec bytecode in globals, locals File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 260, in <module> renpy.call_in_new_context("_main_menu") File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\game.py", line 330, in call_in_new_context return renpy.execution.run_context(False) File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 794, in run_context context.pop_all_dynamic() File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script python hide: File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 313, in pop_dynamic del store[k] KeyError: u'_main_menu_screen'
well that was nice little update it was pretty quick if I do say so myself and not sure if you know about this error or not but I ran into an error when I chose the option to wait for Nikolai but all in all it went by pretty quickly since I continued from where I last left of it ended right when we fell asleep on Daddy Johns lap now thats one lucky MC hehehe I'm so jealous lol
I believe these bugs are fixed in this new update, please tell me if they are not, or if you find more bugs! The game would be no fun without some deaths!
Hi Mukjz! Thanks for the biggest review I have ever received! Sorry for the grammatical errors, my English is not very good, but Sean from Ottercorrect Literature Services is trying to fix it (Poor boy, it's a lot of work).
The project still has a long way to go and it has a lot to improve, but we are working on it! Hroft32 is saving me with the drawings, none of us are professional, but he has a lot of potential, while I should return to the stickman drawings hahaha. Hroft32 is also responsible for the Russian translation, I am from Brazil, I do not know anything about Russian.
The android version is still a problem to be solved, I believe we will need to make a different code especially for it, a bit of work but not difficult.
Implementing the date is a good idea, worth a try.
There will be sex scenes in the game, I still need to work the story to lead to this, but I can say that it is not far from happening XD.
I really appreciated everything you said, thank you very much. Let's work on improving every topic you have!
The new update is now available, I hope you enjoy the changes!
Eu desenvolvo melhor de madrugada, mas ainda não dormi haha
Rapaz, espero que você não tenha ficado ofendido quanto ao seu post, ele vai ser muito útil pro projeto! Mas não dava para manter ele aqui nos comentários .
Sim, ainda estou desenvolvendo a história, gasto mais tempo rescrevendo coisas do que escrevendo coisa nova haha, mas ainda tem muito por vir.
Tem um Russo e um Norte Americano me ajudando com o projeto, dei muita sorte!
Meus desenhos são terríveis, os primeiros servem só pra rir, mas ainda to aprendendo tb.
I just finished playing the demo and I gotta say I really like the characters i think Jean is just so adorable to the point where its just so cute lol and John is such daddy and I love it lol and the story is pretty interesting can't wait to play the next update please keep up the great work! when do you guys update the game anyway?
yay a new update ill be sure to play it as soon as i can and give you feedback as well and heheh yea he's very cute that its just adorable and hahaha you're not wrong about that we all definitely need a daddy especially one as hot as John OWO
Basically in the maps you need to go after him, and when you have to make a choice you guess what would please him. A tip is he don't like to wait and don't like to have his invites denied.
The game still in development and has a long way to go, still don't have any major "interaction" between the characters. But it might have soon.
Wow, just wow! This is not only a great visual novel, but I could see my native language in it. Very beautiful work of the artist, smooth animation and a well-built plot! Only sometimes the characters jump from the informal "ты" to the formal "вы" and this sometimes causes confusion. (Russian pronouns). Please continue your project! Hello from Russia!
Спасибо за теплый отзыв. Возможно где то остались ошибки с местоимениями "ты" и "вы". Но я старался сделать общение персонажей более формальными в начале игры, а позже более дружественными. Жан как самый скромный, ему сложно перейти на ты и он общается на "вы". А Джон, сразу пытается "доминировать" и как то тебя вывести из себя, указывая на твою неопытность, по этому он может и грубить, обращаясь на "ты". Ну, может я и сам пропустил где-то какие то моменты. В следующих апдейтах перевод будет гораздо улучшен. Уже со следующего, будет полный перевод имен и кнопок в меню. Спасибо еще раз за положительный отзыв)
Hi @Maxiess i really enjoy playing this game just some little thing i need to say about its so bright anwer i have sometimes if it could be the qestuons darker to have a clear viev of them what i kinda miss on earlly game starts was like in first army like it was personally fast start i would like more about some backroundstory how he get in the army how meet leopard friend like for me personally is missing on start but when u got the ice army it start to have point you start have feeling for the characters who are there like meet them now about them better some romance starting and i like the smart strategy like no fighting try to have piece no killing i like that point and that elevator its really interesting there so many things what can doing down there some experiments on ppl or something like that cause that and Jean was affriad of that doctor bunny (sorry about names not my best side) :D and also what i like about your game you can like have a character and u see him his face animation its really cool will be interesting if have the others in menu choose character like difrent story that would be really interesting i would like that personally i really enjoy myself playing this game and i am looking foward to see more of this game and story and sorry for this long coment :D and sorry about my english i am from slovakia xD
We change the letter type for the next update to see if get easier to read all the text.
I have not giving much attention to George in the old updates, but slowly this will change, and with him you will be able to know more about the academic life of the player. I am happy you are enjoying the story, I know still has a lot improve tho.
The character appearance and animation is Hroft32's work, he is doing some amazing job in this project.
I enjoyed reading all your post, no reason to apologizise about the size of it, and my english is not that great either, Sean are carring the weight to fix it for me XD.
i've finished both endings and i gotta say, This is definetly a really good VN. Its got amazing potential and i kinda want to strangle the Lead Scientist. HE HAS ZERO VERBAL BOUNDARIES?! Its a really good mix between Confusion, Love and Secrecy. So far, i love it, and its written like a book series that leaves you with a cliffhanger everytime! Thank you so much for putting time and Effort into the game and keep up the amazing work!
At first this interested me, so I tried it. It was worth it. I was disappointed by the cliffhanger but I read that it's the first version so it makes sense. The game is great! The story is paced nicely, however, there are some grammatical mistakes in the dialogues. Other than that, the characters are superb and their interaction natural (and Jean makes me want to hug him). There are things to be improved but the basics are very solid. This is definitely going to my watch list and I see a bright future for it (y) Kudos from Indonesia :D
Thank You! About the grammar mistakes, Sean is fixing it for me since I am not a great english writer. The game is in development, still a lot of space to improve. Your feedback is really important! Hello from Brazil!
Hey! Came across this project, and would love to try it out, but your download links seem to be broken (Might I suggest using something other than OneDrive?)
Can I ask witch plataform you use? Windows, Mac or Andorid? Because you are the first one reporing this problem! But I will give more download options for the next update.
Great game!!!!..nice story.i like johns story.(Hope there will be Human choices for character creation:)))..can't wait for the next update.love your game:)
Thank you, I think John is everybody's favorite path, I need to make the others more interesting XD! There's plans to human charactes, but I can't say for sure when it will happen. Next update by the end of the month, I hope.
Damn that cliffhanger, riveting story so far. Jean is fucking precious and John is the kind of daddy i like. Really good character creator for a visual novel especially.
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Are there going to be anymore updates?
This is so good. Was disappointed when it just stopped. Please continue this, there story line is very interesting, really got my attention.
Also, because it bugs me, there is no such thing as a 13:00pm, its 1300 hrs. Sorry, it just really bugged me.
I can tell. I'm just used to my aforementioned format, that's how I've used it for so long, and with the Army if you say otherwise, they'll just correct you. So a.m and p.m with hundred hours is not a thing here. Us Americans are apparently special with our measurements. 😁
You haven't update the game scenes February 1st and it's starting to get interesting with John
oml please come back this game is so good so far and I really want to see it to its finish
Are you coming back? Please?
Is this game gonna update again? lol
I played this game last night i didn't read any dialogue i just skiped all the dialogue becuase i haven't a lot of time but the game impress me a lot. keep going kile this guys good job !
THE_TACOskiller from Italy
I have to say, as many others, this VN (visual novel) has a great potential. Sadly there are so many errors that even for one like me, whose native language is not english, they're really distracting... I see now... because it was translated from russian into english, that's why.
Also, the expressions of the characters or the scenes often won't match the story.
These are some thaughts for now. I don't know if the game itself isn't finished at all (like others here in this genre) or if you are just going to add more. Since I am not even half way through, I guess, I haven't experienced much but I know that there's one story line missing. Okay so it seems I played through.
Take your time. People mostly prefere quality over quantity.
To be honest I think it went too fast when John told the “main character“ to put his head on his lap but it's no big deal after all.
You now may think I only have bad words for your work but it's really not like that. I only discovered VNs recently but I have played through a couple by now. Most of them are very well made and much longer so I am propably more critical than I should be. I know it takes time to write and do all the work which comes with a VN.
(To name a few VN: Tennis Ace, WSSAP - Wolfstar Sins and Paradise, Uncommon Breed, Human Cargo (not the best artwork but pretty great story and romance), Guardians of ParVa'La (very unfinished but super story so far (and sex, if that's important to you)). These onse are insane. There are more but I haven't managed to play them, yet. (For example Morenatsu, Echo, After Class, Adastra...)
Anyways good luck with bringing out future updates and keep it up!
Cheers from Germany
( By the way the story so far made me really excited for what is coming up next. I have some ideas about what might happen, though... ;)
i love the game 😊
So this is a pretty good update. As promised, the buttons and titles have been translated. There are no complaints about the buttons, but the names do not look very good. (This is just my whining, do not worry). In addition to small grammatical mistakes (I believe in you, Hroft32), I noticed one serious.
If you decide to talk about the corpses and the next choice you answer the letter, the main character will want to talk again about the corpses and show us an empty map.
I have to say the game surprised me. The history and the environment are well implemented. The character graphics are very changeable when Jean suddenly loses the weapon or the helmet. Here and there are a few typos, but the game has very good points in terms of structure and characters. I hope Jean gets a little more attention I already like him. I am excited which way it will continue.
1. Refectory and my Office are swapped on the card at the computer.
2. If you do not give the necklace to Nikolai, there will be an error screen and if you press Ignore the scene is already over =
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/Map6.rpy", line 142, in script
Exception: Sayer 'Ni' is not defined.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/Map6.rpy", line 142, in script
File "C:\Users\ERDAL\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 593, in execute
who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
File "C:\Users\ERDAL\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 509, in eval_who
raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer 'Ni' is not defined.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.4.2187
B101 0.1
i'm loving this game so far, i hope that for next update may include sex scenes and if there was a sidestory or something to have with john that'd be nice, he is so cute!
also i realized that in some parts the music sounds really bad and lazy (no offense) so you could improve that like the gym music or battle music.
i like a lot the direction the game is going and i'd say that it really got a lot of potential, please keep adding more stuff to it, i love it!
noooooo "Do you like him?" and then To be continued!!! why are you guys so good with Cliffhangers?!
Ok, downloaded the new version and tried to boot up a save before speaking with the prisoner a second time and got this for my trouble after I did two rollbacks and the game auto closed.
-Edit-
After going back two saves to the mess hall it went as normal, damn weird though. Good thing I'm one of those save often kinda people.
Will leave the trace log up regardless.
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 256, in script
python:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 260, in <module>
renpy.call_in_new_context("_main_menu")
KeyError: u'_main_menu_screen'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 295, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\main.py", line 487, in main
run(restart)
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\main.py", line 147, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 761, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 256, in script
python:
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 814, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1719, in py_exec_bytecode
exec bytecode in globals, locals
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 260, in <module>
renpy.call_in_new_context("_main_menu")
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\game.py", line 330, in call_in_new_context
return renpy.execution.run_context(False)
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 794, in run_context
context.pop_all_dynamic()
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script
python hide:
File "C:\Users\zakst\Downloads\B101-1.11-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 313, in pop_dynamic
del store[k]
KeyError: u'_main_menu_screen'
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.4.2187
B101 0.1
well that was nice little update it was pretty quick if I do say so myself and not sure if you know about this error or not but I ran into an error when I chose the option to wait for Nikolai but all in all it went by pretty quickly since I continued from where I last left of it ended right when we fell asleep on Daddy Johns lap now thats one lucky MC hehehe I'm so jealous lol
Thank you! I will fix the bug you found.
I believe these bugs are fixed in this new update, please tell me if they are not, or if you find more bugs!
The game would be no fun without some deaths!
error at the cell with the bull...or...sheep..i guess..looking guy
Hi Mukjz! Thanks for the biggest review I have ever received! Sorry for the grammatical errors, my English is not very good, but Sean from Ottercorrect Literature Services is trying to fix it (Poor boy, it's a lot of work).
The project still has a long way to go and it has a lot to improve, but we are working on it! Hroft32 is saving me with the drawings, none of us are professional, but he has a lot of potential, while I should return to the stickman drawings hahaha. Hroft32 is also responsible for the Russian translation, I am from Brazil, I do not know anything about Russian.
The android version is still a problem to be solved, I believe we will need to make a different code especially for it, a bit of work but not difficult.
Implementing the date is a good idea, worth a try.
There will be sex scenes in the game, I still need to work the story to lead to this, but I can say that it is not far from happening XD.
I really appreciated everything you said, thank you very much. Let's work on improving every topic you have!
The new update is now available, I hope you enjoy the changes!
Eu desenvolvo melhor de madrugada, mas ainda não dormi haha
Rapaz, espero que você não tenha ficado ofendido quanto ao seu post, ele vai ser muito útil pro projeto! Mas não dava para manter ele aqui nos comentários .
Sim, ainda estou desenvolvendo a história, gasto mais tempo rescrevendo coisas do que escrevendo coisa nova haha, mas ainda tem muito por vir.
Tem um Russo e um Norte Americano me ajudando com o projeto, dei muita sorte!
Meus desenhos são terríveis, os primeiros servem só pra rir, mas ainda to aprendendo tb.
I just finished playing the demo and I gotta say I really like the characters i think Jean is just so adorable to the point where its just so cute lol and John is such daddy and I love it lol and the story is pretty interesting can't wait to play the next update please keep up the great work! when do you guys update the game anyway?
Thank you! I also think Jean cute and guess we all need a Daddy hahaha.
There is a new update available, please, check it if you have time!
yay a new update ill be sure to play it as soon as i can and give you feedback as well and heheh yea he's very cute that its just adorable and hahaha you're not wrong about that we all definitely need a daddy especially one as hot as John OWO
Thank you! Hope you enjoy the new update.
I love the story so far, but i'm a little confused, how do you get in johns good graces?
Basically in the maps you need to go after him, and when you have to make a choice you guess what would please him. A tip is he don't like to wait and don't like to have his invites denied.
The game still in development and has a long way to go, still don't have any major "interaction" between the characters. But it might have soon.
Thanks for the info and keep up the good work :3
May i ask if y'all have an update scchedule?
We do the updates in the last day of the month.
Thanks!
Wow, just wow! This is not only a great visual novel, but I could see my native language in it. Very beautiful work of the artist, smooth animation and a well-built plot! Only sometimes the characters jump from the informal "ты" to the formal "вы" and this sometimes causes confusion. (Russian pronouns). Please continue your project! Hello from Russia!
(* ^ ω ^)／
P.S. Nikolai is a great name.
Спасибо за теплый отзыв. Возможно где то остались ошибки с местоимениями "ты" и "вы". Но я старался сделать общение персонажей более формальными в начале игры, а позже более дружественными. Жан как самый скромный, ему сложно перейти на ты и он общается на "вы". А Джон, сразу пытается "доминировать" и как то тебя вывести из себя, указывая на твою неопытность, по этому он может и грубить, обращаясь на "ты". Ну, может я и сам пропустил где-то какие то моменты. В следующих апдейтах перевод будет гораздо улучшен. Уже со следующего, будет полный перевод имен и кнопок в меню. Спасибо еще раз за положительный отзыв)
by Hroft32
Hi @Maxiess i really enjoy playing this game just some little thing i need to say about its so bright anwer i have sometimes if it could be the qestuons darker to have a clear viev of them what i kinda miss on earlly game starts was like in first army like it was personally fast start i would like more about some backroundstory how he get in the army how meet leopard friend like for me personally is missing on start but when u got the ice army it start to have point you start have feeling for the characters who are there like meet them now about them better some romance starting and i like the smart strategy like no fighting try to have piece no killing i like that point and that elevator its really interesting there so many things what can doing down there some experiments on ppl or something like that cause that and Jean was affriad of that doctor bunny (sorry about names not my best side) :D and also what i like about your game you can like have a character and u see him his face animation its really cool will be interesting if have the others in menu choose character like difrent story that would be really interesting i would like that personally i really enjoy myself playing this game and i am looking foward to see more of this game and story and sorry for this long coment :D and sorry about my english i am from slovakia xD
Hey NexusDarius!
We change the letter type for the next update to see if get easier to read all the text.
I have not giving much attention to George in the old updates, but slowly this will change, and with him you will be able to know more about the academic life of the player. I am happy you are enjoying the story, I know still has a lot improve tho.
The character appearance and animation is Hroft32's work, he is doing some amazing job in this project.
I enjoyed reading all your post, no reason to apologizise about the size of it, and my english is not that great either, Sean are carring the weight to fix it for me XD.
Thank you from Brazil!
wow .. do have more
Next update by the end of the month!
cool i hope there is a sex scene
i've finished both endings and i gotta say, This is definetly a really good VN. Its got amazing potential and i kinda want to strangle the Lead Scientist. HE HAS ZERO VERBAL BOUNDARIES?! Its a really good mix between Confusion, Love and Secrecy. So far, i love it, and its written like a book series that leaves you with a cliffhanger everytime! Thank you so much for putting time and Effort into the game and keep up the amazing work!
Thank you so much Mr. Kaos! Believe or not the Lead Scientist will be a dateable character hahaha. I am happy to hear you are enjoying the game!
He is in need to show something good, or everybody will hate him! 🤣
At first this interested me, so I tried it. It was worth it. I was disappointed by the cliffhanger but I read that it's the first version so it makes sense. The game is great! The story is paced nicely, however, there are some grammatical mistakes in the dialogues. Other than that, the characters are superb and their interaction natural (and Jean makes me want to hug him). There are things to be improved but the basics are very solid. This is definitely going to my watch list and I see a bright future for it (y) Kudos from Indonesia :D
Thank You! About the grammar mistakes, Sean is fixing it for me since I am not a great english writer. The game is in development, still a lot of space to improve. Your feedback is really important! Hello from Brazil!
I like it ;) Waiting for more <3
Thank You! Soon there will be a new update.
great but did the story is good too :3
Thank You! XD
Hey! Came across this project, and would love to try it out, but your download links seem to be broken (Might I suggest using something other than OneDrive?)
Can I ask witch plataform you use? Windows, Mac or Andorid? Because you are the first one reporing this problem! But I will give more download options for the next update.
I'm on Windows. The download seems to be working now, so probably just a glitch.
I see, even so, I will add more options to the next update, to avoid these kind of problems.
Thank you!
Great game!!!!..nice story.i like johns story.(Hope there will be Human choices for character creation:)))..can't wait for the next update.love your game:)
Thank you, I think John is everybody's favorite path, I need to make the others more interesting XD! There's plans to human charactes, but I can't say for sure when it will happen. Next update by the end of the month, I hope.
Great game ! love it so far... can't wait for more !! greetings from France !
Hey! Thank you, glad you enjoyed! By the end of the month will be another update (I hope). Greetings from Brazil!
yeepee ! looking forward to discovering it ;^)
I really enjoyed the story so far can't wait for the next update
Thank you! Next update by the end of the month! XD
Damn that cliffhanger, riveting story so far. Jean is fucking precious and John is the kind of daddy i like. Really good character creator for a visual novel especially.
Thank you so much! It makes me really happy and give me motivation to keep working!